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Wednesday, September 18, 2019

Going to the beach


We went to the beach and set up the tents. Mum set up the poles, Dad put the poles in the right place. I had to find the pegs and Poppa hammered them in. When the tent was set we had a kai chops, sausage and steak.

When it was raining at the beach we went in our tents and played snakes and ladders and other board games. I bet my little brothers Devontay, Jack and Deeangelo. I had my own tent and we played there.  When it stop raining we had a race to see who is the best at maths but we have to get the answers right and we started I got out of my tents and I won.

At night I made a big hole for the fire so we could toast Marshmallows on sticks. It was nice and sticky. The kai it was yummy. When it was the morning I had a swim before Everyone woke up. I had a banana and a glass of milk.


WALHT write an interesting recount. I am trying to add more detail. I found it easy because speech.  Next time I want to remember to add fullstops.

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